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LANDMARK COMP

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  • ItzYeBoiNubItzYeBoiNub Posts: 55Member
    Detech said:

    LAST DAY FOR EXPERT ENTRIES!!!

    EXPERT LVL:
    Entry #1 - PIPTR0 - Saint Basil’s Cathedral
    Location: Mount Spokebigsby (11 east, 72 above)

    Entry #2 - AquaPhynn - Winterfell Manor
    Location: Winterfell (145 west, 50 above)

    Entry #3 - Aventail - Dreth Castle
    Location: Lower Princefax (523 east, 48 above)

    Entry #4 - Rattle - Royal Woods Tower
    Location: Royal Woods (93 west, 15 above)

    Entry #5 - racerdog - The Great Temple of Une
    Location: Venus (world center)

    Entry #6 - Ryan_123 - The Punpkin Guardian
    Location: mumlund grove (128 west, 14 below) (NEED SCREEN)

    Entry #7 – Mihir - Abandoned Village
    Location: Mihir (spawn)

    Entry #8 – Firelore (AMWhy) – The Great Clock
    Location: The Great Clock (spawn)

    Entry #9 – Fanta (ItzYeBoiNub) – The Final Hope
    Location: Mihir (852 West, 25 Up)

    Entry #10 – IronManArcher – Class-2 BU Warship
    Location: The War (160 west, 170 above)

    Entry #11 - Infiniti - Oakland District
    Location: Deepgate - Oakland District (296 west, 82 above)

    Entry #12 - WalrusLord - Abandoned Mining Op.
    Location: Walrus Land (293 west, 75 above)

    Entry #13 - ZetaroEmperror - JP Mysterious Place
    Location: Design HQ (229west 183above)

    I know HellHawk, Bastian7 and one more person were building something. Please remind them that this is the last day. Bastian7 said he will join as a judge if he doesn't finish, so maybe don't remind him too much, cause we need a judge lol

    A lot more competition in the Expert Comp! 13 entries!!!

    P.S. Some of these screenshots are SO huge!!! This competition would not be possible without racerdog!!! THANK YOU!!!

    Uhh my screenshot guy is still taking the new screenshot...Can ya maybe do my judging last if I don’t post it in time.
  • AMWhyAMWhy http://forums.deepworldgame.com/discussion/27517/the-kepler-colony-evacuationPosts: 1,268Member, Arbiter

    I think you have missed Chuuya's Oil Rig from the list. As much as it pains me to say it, that is, as it's definitely a strong contender!

  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    Sorry @chuuya . I made the post in a rush. I will make sure everyone's entry and screenshot is as needed before we judge.

    For now I hope the last people who spent time building get their entries in.
  • ItzYeBoiNubItzYeBoiNub Posts: 55Member

    Level: EXPERT
    World: Mihir (852 West, 25 Up)
    Name: The Final Hope
    Builder: Fanta
    Storyline:
    Long ago, prior to the apocalyptic events of the Brain, lived a Race known now as Dragons. These were almighty creatures and were worshipped as almost Gods. This,however,soon came to an end....During the Brain War the Dragons fought hard to push back the Brains however the Advanced Technology the Brains possessed was beyond alien. With no where else to run, they retreated. The Dragons then formed a Organisation called The Top Hats. These Dragons fled to an island called Spero, watched over by The Emperor Dragon, and began replicating Brain Technology and mass producing. They sent down a letter (along with food supplies) to the mankind which told them there will be a hope...there is always A Final Hope...

    https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/561517506066645012/564497578045997076/FantaEntry.png

    P.S: Updated Screenshot
  • MihirGamesMihirGames Lost in spacePosts: 327Member
    Fanta tryhard
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    edited April 7
    Screenshot is such poor quality :(
    Do you have the image in larger size?

    Fanta u have so many things in there going on at once lol

    I think I left Mofc's entry out as well.
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    edited April 7
    Level: Expert
    Entry #14
    Builder: Mofc1991
    Location: Landmark Competition(0 Central)
    Landmark: Floating Palace

    Story Behind It-A lonely palace sat still on the high hills of west wittlestan to then be forcefully pushed from the ground due to a high level natural disaster to then be left floating alongside its fellow towers.

    The palace was originally built to hold the highest of valuables before a huge outbreak of brains left the building to die and rust with no one finding it for years and years.

    Now the huge monument has been found and set as a tourist destination for its appearance and story for everyone to find and check out!

    SCREENSHOT NEEDED
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    edited April 7
    Level: Expert
    Entry #15
    Builder: Chuuya
    Location: Only spawn in the world "Port Mafia".
    Name: The Oil Rig

    Story:
    After the brain invasion, the lands were uninhabitable. There could be no sanctuary located on land - so we took to the seas. Using the already built oil rigs, many have relocated here for safety. However with the minimum space there, living will be difficult. Featuring the necessities: shelter, food, water, clothing, and leisure activities. There is a tavern, clinic, casino, and more. We have also reformed the preconstructed drill tower into a telecommunications tower, which is always looking out for invaders and other settlements.

    image

    P.S. this info is for me so I don't forget.
  • ItzYeBoiNubItzYeBoiNub Posts: 55Member
    Detech said:

    Screenshot is such poor quality :(
    Do you have the image in larger size?

    Fanta u have so many things in there going on at once lol

    I think I left Mofc's entry out as well.

    I don’t have the screenshot in a larger size sorry detech for the bad quality.
  • racerdogracerdog Posts: 171Member
    Detech said:

    Level: Expert
    Entry #14
    Builder: Mofc1991
    Location: Landmark Competition(0 Central)
    Landmark: Floating Palace

    Story Behind It-A lonely palace sat still on the high hills of west wittlestan to then be forcefully pushed from the ground due to a high level natural disaster to then be left floating alongside its fellow towers.

    The palace was originally built to hold the highest of valuables before a huge outbreak of brains left the building to die and rust with no one finding it for years and years.

    Now the huge monument has been found and set as a tourist destination for its appearance and story for everyone to find and check out!

    SCREENSHOT NEEDED

    I did make one for Mofc. I was asked to post it in the Screenshot of the day thread. Mofc wanted to review it. I posted it on March 26th.
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    Thank you sir racerdog!
    @Mofc1991 is that screenshot of your entry posted in 'screenshot of the day' thread good to go? Or do you need a fresh one?
  • mofc1991mofc1991 Posts: 761Member

    I used racerdogs picture as a guide so I could add to it I need the screenshot to show not only the main structure but all the things surrounding it aswell! :)

  • racerdogracerdog Posts: 171Member
    mofc1991 said:

    I used racerdogs picture as a guide so I could add to it I need the screenshot to show not only the main structure but all the things surrounding it aswell! :)

    Here's a new one.
    Screen Shot 2019-04-07 at 4.29.09 PM.jpg
    4627 x 2465 - 9M
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    Some crazy entries in this competition!!!
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    BirdBanana scored 26.5 - placing him into 6.5th place
    Here is BirdBanana's prize from the reserve prize pool.
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    399 x 315 - 114K
  • ItzYeBoiNubItzYeBoiNub Posts: 55Member
    Congratulations BirdBanana!
  • IronManArcherIronManArcher STEEEEEEEEEEAM JEETSPosts: 2,847Member
    If I don’t win, at least give me that delicious large steam jet...
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    As promised, here is some feedback from the judges.
    Please keep in mind that judges say is their personal opinion and they only express it to help builders.

    JUDGE X

    Entry #1 - Apocalypse Castle
    Score: 7
    Nice detail – Flags, banners, metal walls are not plain, background is interesting. Building style of walls and backdrop is a bit chaotic. Like the use of scaffolding to hold up the building. The blue crystal tentacles look weird, not sure what they are, where they come from and what they are supposed to do, would have been nice if they continued under the bridge and would have been attached to something, or attached to the castle. Castle looks like a bridge building, because it is so thin. Not a lot of space inside of the castle. Interior furniture looks nice. Want to see more details on the outside perimeter of the castle. Looks a bit unfinished. You can see great attention to detail inside the castle, but on the outside it looks a bit empty – just earth and a few items here and there. Story does not convince why this should be a noteworthy deepworld landmark, maybe it's just one of many shelters... what makes this place special? How is it related to deepworld? This part is not clear. style is there, detail is there, needs more coordination of the structure and mapping of the idea to utilize space better. I give this build a solid 7, would have been a 7 if there was a better story to the build, and I don't just mean in words.

    Entry #2 - Deepworld Energy Co's Steam Rocket to Mars
    Score: 6
    Clear build, you can tell it's a rocket, nothing is left in question. Story is clear as well, it's one of the first rockets and worth a mention. But the way the rocket is build brings up a lot of questions. The rocket looks like a skeleton, what you build before you start adding details. No roofing, no metal bridges, nothing is used to add curves and make the rocket look more finished. Rooms inside the rocket need better planning. Rocket has to have no empty space, each square of space is valuable. Scaffolding doesn't look too good behind the rocket. In conclusion, the idea is good and clear. Building needs more detail and effort. I give this build a 6.5

    Entry #3 - King of Space
    Score: 7
    Interesting idea and overall the whole build looks like a well planned picture. Idea is clear, a large UFO, maybe the main UFO of deepworld. Maybe it's in charge of the brain invasion? Interior looks simple, no curves (using roofs bridges). Entry has style, imagination and humor. I would spend more time experimenting with detail.

    Entry #4 - Sky Plaza
    Score: 7
    interesting concept and looks good overall from a distance. Where is the actual plaza? I see an empty platform held up by air balloons and 2 airships. Airships look nice. Would love to see more use of different items/blocks: roofs, bridges, maybe ropes.

    Entry #5 - Iocon
    Score: 4
    Looks like an unfinished building filled with random rooms. Needs more effort and planning, and details.
    Building does not live up to the story.

    Entry #6 - Story-A shelter
    Score: 7
    Simple but well planned structure. Not a bad attention to detail. Not sure how people get to the building up the mountain. What makes this not just another shelter in the world of deepworld?

    Entry #7 - First Onyx Mine
    Score: 6
    Good attention to detail in some cases and poor in others. Airship looks strange because of the fine wood standing out so much, couldn't tell what it is at first. The mine needs more planning, doesn't really look like a mine, goes down just above the hight of the house. Overall not a bad entry, but not the best “landmark”

    Entry #8 - Phoenix Dragon Plaza
    Score: 4
    Nothing special about the building, looks like an average plaza. Very chaotic inside with all the spammed rares and different blocks. 3 different roofs and dragons on the balconies are a nice touch. Good thing is that it looks like the builder doesn't really need to get a prize, he is already rich! :) Need to look at buildings in the game and study some elements that make the buildings look unique

    Entry #9 - Wealthy Vault
    Score: 4
    Interesting vault for ingame use and would have been a good entry for a bunker competition. But this is a Landmark competition. If this was a great vault of some sort with lots of epic architectural elements, it could have been a great entry. Builder didn't show his skills in this entry well enough to give advice.

    Entry #10 - The Marble Hall
    Score: 6
    Looks like a good skeleton for a build. Lack of details make it look empty and a bit out of place. Story said that the location started as a little town and grew into grew into something. Where is the city around the building? Where are the riches mined in the location? Could of been a great entry if more time was spent on thinking it through and adding details.

    Entry #11 - Painting Castle
    Score: 1
    empty square facility. No interior. No detail. No story.

    Entry # 12 - SteamPunk
    Score: 5
    Looks like an epic scene. Lots of things going on at once, but each build individually looks average. En you read “Steam Punk city “ - you expect more steampunk – pipes, mechanical stuff... No clear landmark as well. Would of been a good entry for a different competition maybe.
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    Judge Y

    Entry #1 - Apocalypse Castle

    +Looks good from a distance. Good thought has gone into what should be included.

    -Some of the details look weird at best. For example, the lamppost going through the ceiling just looks wrong.

    Score: 7



    Entry #2 - Deepworld Energy Co's Steam Rocket to Mars

    +It's a clean build. Good symmetry.

    -It's a simple design. Internal labelling would have helped a lot.

    Score: 5



    Entry #3 - King of Space

    +Looks good as a whole.

    -Is it an internal view or external?

    -The design of the main saucer is odd.

    Score: 3



    Entry #4 - Sky Plaza

    +Good, unique design in the Deepworld style.

    +Looks good as a whole.

    -Too much scaffolding?

    Score: 9



    Entry #5 - Iocon

    +Clean design. Nice use of asymmetry.

    -Unfinished

    -Doesn't stand out.

    Score: 4



    Entry #6 - Story-A shelter

    +Good symmetric design

    -Marble pillars don't fit with the overall colour scheme.

    Score: 7



    Entry #7 - First Onyx Mine

    +Good industrial design.

    +Nice details.

    -Odd decoration choices. Particularly the three paintings together and the outdoor couch.

    Score: 8



    Entry #8 - Phoenix Dragon Plaza

    -Spam of rare items.

    -Common example of a bad market design.

    Score: 1



    Entry #9 - Wealthy Vault

    +Nice wall design

    -not a landmark

    -odd mix of onyx and diamonds

    Score: 4



    Entry #10 - The Marble Hall

    +looks beautiful

    -feels empty.

    Score: 8



    Entry #11 - Painting Castle

    -empty

    -unfinished

    Score: 1



    Entry # 12 - SteamPunk

    +nice visually

    -Gods don't fit the Deepworld theme

    -Why is the ship floating?

    Score: 5
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    EXPERT Comp is now closed.
    If you see @Everywhen @Simplin or @Bastian7 in game, please ask them to check forum
  • ItzYeBoiNubItzYeBoiNub Posts: 55Member
    Yus! Good luck to all!
  • mofc1991mofc1991 Posts: 761Member

    Thank you racerdog and Goodluck!

  • TescosTescos SawConPosts: 259Member
    gl pro builders
  • AMWhyAMWhy http://forums.deepworldgame.com/discussion/27517/the-kepler-colony-evacuationPosts: 1,268Member, Arbiter

    Here is the back story for the Giant Clock.

    i sent it to Detech via pm so the judges hopefully have it, but just in case...


    The Giant Clock was completed by renowned clock maker Sir Thomas Harrison in time for the fated World's Fair. Due to the size, it was impossible to take the landmark to the fair so it was instead to be visited by the brightest minds after the fair had ended. The singularity and the arrival of the brains meant that never happened. Instead, the Clock was locked from the inside. It is claimed that Thomas Harrison was buried within, but with no way to get inside, this was impossible to verify. Until now. Now, 25 years after it's completion, a door has opened...

  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    EXPERT COMPETITION JUDGING HAS BEGUN!

    We have 4 judges for this competition and one arbiter.
    The Judges are: @Bastian7 @Simplin @Everywhen @Detech
    Arbiter wants to stay anonymous. The only purpose of the arbiter is to receive scores from the judges and then return them to the judges all at once, so that no judge knows other judges scores while judging.



    JUDGING SYSTEM for EXPERT LVL :

    Nomination of entries has been removed since there are only 15 entries.

    All entries will be judged as described below:

    Judges (opinion) Points: 1-10 points
    Each entry will be judged from 1-10 points on how well the build works in the judge's opinion.

    Detail: 1-5 points
    Attention to detail. Is the entry plain? Or is every square thought through and detailed. Has the builder combined materials in an interesting way to express his idea? Has he used various elements and techniques in his entry?

    Theme: 1-5 points
    How related is the entry to the Deepworld theme?

    Creativity/Precision: 1-5 points
    We want to see creative builds.
    If the builder has made a copy of a real Landmark (as it has survived the apocalypse of deepworld) then we mark the precision of how accurate the build is to the actual thing.
    If the builder has created an imaginary Landmark, judges are to judge creativity.

    Each entry will get the following score:
    Main Points: __ (1-10)
    Detail: __ (1-5)
    Theme: __ (1-5)
    Creativity/Precision: __ (1-5)
    Total: __ (4-25)
    1 Piptro.jpg
    1405 x 1935 - 2M
    2 AquaPhynn.jpg
    3169 x 2049 - 4M
    3 Aventail.jpg
    3167 x 1647 - 4M
    4 Rattle.jpg
    2471 x 2507 - 5M
    5 racerdog.jpg
    2159 x 3000 - 4M
    6 Ryan_123.jpg
    674 x 733 - 419K
    7 Mihir.jpg
    2561 x 1921 - 4M
    8 Firelore.jpg
    3000 x 2618 - 6M
    9 Fanta.jpg
    2744 x 2000 - 3M
    10 IronManArcher.jpg
    3133 x 1142 - 2M
    11 Infiniti.jpg
    3319 x 2838 - 4M
    12 WalrusLord.jpg
    2344 x 1369 - 3M
    13 ZetaroEmperror.jpg
    2022 x 1777 - 2M
    15 chuuya.jpg
    1212 x 2000 - 1M
    14 mofc1991.jpg
    4627 x 2465 - 7M
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    edited April 9
    ENTRIES:
    EXPERT LVL:
    Entry #1 - PIPTR0 - Saint Basil’s Cathedral
    Location: Mount Spokebigsby (11 east, 72 above)
    Story: Cathedral in Moscow survived the apocalypse!
    image


    Entry #2 - AquaPhynn - Winterfell Manor
    Location: Winterfell (145 west, 50 above)
    Story: Winterfell Manor. One of the only surviving Manors in the frozen wasteland of deepworld.
    image


    Entry #3 - Aventail - Dreth Castle
    Location: Lower Princefax (523 east, 48 above)
    Story: A wealthy explorer named John "Wolf" Dreth has built a large castle atop a hill.
    image


    Entry #4 - Rattle - Royal Woods Tower
    Location: Royal Woods (93 west, 15 above)
    Story: Royal Woods Tower, a large complex where humankind may find a way to restore life in deepworld.
    image


    Entry #5 - racerdog - The Great Temple of Une
    Location: Venus (world center)
    Story: The Une Pipe has been ignored as a humble steam conduit and an unwanted painting. We have been so wrong. The Great Temple of Une has been discovered on Venus. Come see the pipe in its true exalted nature and pay homage to the glory of UNE. CAUTION: If you have ever uttered a disparaging word upon finding an Une Pipe Painting, the guardian will sense unworthiness and unleash an army of automata to dispose of your foul presence.
    image


    Entry #6 - Ryan_123 - The Punpkin Guardian
    Location: mumlund grove (128 west, 14 below)
    Story: his is a tale of esmerelda the last of her kind to protect and keep order and balance between the jack of lanterns and normal pumpkins!
    image


    Entry #7 – Mihir - Abandoned Village
    Location: Mihir (spawn)
    Story: An abandoned village which was left due to paranormal activity, and sightings of ghosts.
    image

    Entry #8 – Firelore (AMWhy) – The Great Clock
    Location: The Great Clock (spawn)
    Story: The Giant Clock was completed by renowned clock maker Sir Thomas Harrison in time for the fated World's Fair. Due to the size, it was impossible to take the landmark to the fair so it was instead to be visited by the brightest minds after the fair had ended. The singularity and the arrival of the brains meant that never happened. Instead, the Clock was locked from the inside. It is claimed that Thomas Harrison was buried within, but with no way to get inside, this was impossible to verify. Until now. Now, 25 years after it's completion, a door has opened...
    image


    Entry #9 – Fanta (ItzYeBoiNub) – The Final Hope
    Location: Mihir (852 West, 25 Up)
    Story: Long ago, prior to the apocalyptic events of the Brain, lived a Race known now as Dragons. These were almighty creatures and were worshipped as almost Gods. This,however,soon came to an end....During the Brain War the Dragons fought hard to push back the Brains however the Advanced Technology the Brains possessed was beyond alien. With no where else to run, they retreated. The Dragons then formed a Organisation called The Top Hats. These Dragons fled to an island called Spero, watched over by The Emperor Dragon, and began replicating Brain Technology and mass producing. They sent down a letter (along with food supplies) to the mankind which told them there will be a hope...there is always A Final Hope...
    image


    Entry #10 – IronManArcher – Class-2 BU Warship
    Location: The War (160 west, 170 above)
    Story: A few years after the World Fair and the rise of the brains, a human outpost noticed something strange in the sky. Any scouts sent up came back on fire, but some theorized it was some kind of flying brain boat. When it started deploying brains, they knew they were in trouble.
    After a long fight, the ship was captured, but the defenses remained online. The humans did not see this as a victory, but as the beginning of something terrible.
    image


    Entry #11 - Infiniti - Oakland District
    Location: Deepgate - Oakland District (296 west, 82 above)
    Story: This project was originally started way back in 2015 just for fun, It has changed lots over the years... Its crazy how time flys. I hope to continue this world and maybe even have it be used by Bytebin one day!
    image


    Entry #12 - WalrusLord - Abandoned Mining Op.
    Location: Walrus Land (293 west, 75 above)
    Story: Brass and iron were and are some of the most used materials then. Of course, someone had to supply the demand. And a big supplier was Bulkan Brass & Steel. With mines all across Europe at the time, mining for copper, zinc, and iron. Here is a glimpse at one of their smaller mining operations, with heavy machinery still left behind after the attack of the brains.
    image


    Entry #13 - ZetaroEmperror - JP Mysterious Place
    Location: Design HQ (229 west, 183 above)
    Story: It’s about my imaginary japanese mysterious place with japanese castle in the middle, heaven on top and dragon fossil under the sand.
    image


    Entry #14 - Mofc1991- Floating Palace
    Location: Landmark Competition (19 east, 170 above)
    Story Behind It-A lonely palace sat still on the high hills of west wittlestan to then be forcefully pushed from the ground due to a high level natural disaster to then be left floating alongside its fellow towers.
    The palace was originally built to hold the highest of valuables before a huge outbreak of brains left the building to die and rust with no one finding it for years and years.
    Now the huge monument has been found and set as a tourist destination for its appearance and story for everyone to find and check out!
    image


    Entry #15 - Chuuya (Redolant) - The Oil Rig
    Location: Port Mafia (526 east, 30 above)
    Story: After the brain invasion, the lands were uninhabitable. There could be no sanctuary located on land - so we took to the seas. Using the already built oil rigs, many have relocated here for safety. However with the minimum space there, living will be difficult. Featuring the necessities: shelter, food, water, clothing, and leisure activities. There is a tavern, clinic, casino, and more. We have also reformed the preconstructed drill tower into a telecommunications tower, which is always looking out for invaders and other settlements.
    image
  • IronManArcherIronManArcher STEEEEEEEEEEAM JEETSPosts: 2,847Member
    Mihir, Firelore, or Chuuya will definitely win.
  • DetechDetech Toronto, CanadaPosts: 2,131Member
    edited April 9

    Dear judges, please allow one more entry into the competition.


    Level: EXPERT

    World: Hawks World (169 West, 125 above)

    Name: Flying Bunker

    Builder: HellHawk

    Storyline: State of the art bunker designed to calculate and avoid danger by changing location through the air. Bunker changes location and then recharges from sun light. Bunker was lost for a long time, but now that sunlight shines once again it flew out and was spoted. Bunker contains the famous Ship Wheel once used by the famous captain who was feared through out the seas of deepworld - Captain Lisa!

    P.S. HellHawk finished his entry intime, but couldn't find me ingame and had no forum access.

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    1584 x 940 - 1M
  • BonBonBonBon Posts: 6Member
    I wonder who will win expert :-/
  • ItzYeBoiNubItzYeBoiNub Posts: 55Member
    I bet 5 onyx it’ll be Chuuya
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